I had to record this tune anyway, because George Vinson is helping me get going on a new CD. The song isn't brand new. In fact, I ripped the idea off Habakkuk (Old Testament prophet), who got it from divine inspiration from God himself. Then I created some lyrics during college days to get out of a major research paper. But in 2000, I finally found a musical setting for it that I could enjoy. Hope you do too.
PS. (And yes, I know there's a typo or two in the subtitles... I'm living with it.
God Will Provide
©2000 Noel Durand Robinson
I will rejoice in the Lord
(Tell me) what should I fear
With the Lord at my side
For the Lord is my strength
There’s no valley too low
No mountain too high
All the strength that I need
I know… God will provide
See the power of God
In the works of his hands
From the waves of the sea
To the warm desert sands
Every star sings his name
Even earth shouts his praise
Strong and faithful to save
And forever the same
(repeat chorus then verse 2)
If the blossoms in spring
Or the fruit on the vine
Should decide not to grow
Still I know I'll be fine
Because God is still good
With salvation He'll bless
We don't live by power
But by God's faithfulness
(chorus to end)
You may think this is really "old school", but once you understand how the different elements of a song work, you begin to see why some songs stand out above others.
Let's take a quick look at the different elements of a song's form. (If my examples look like a walk down Memory Lane, that's because I live near there.)
Introductions help establish the key, tempo and mood of a song. You'll know you've found a strong introduction when everyone recognizes the song after the first few seconds. An introduction can be little more than a few guitar chords (Sweet Home Alabama), a gentle guitar solo (Stairway to Heaven) or simply unaccompanied voice (Heaven is a place on Earth).
Verses contains the story line and help answer the journalistic questions about who, what, when, where and why. They tend to be more or less the same from one verse to the next and yet they help move the listener along in an unfolding story. A classic example is from the Beatles (Fool on the Hill.) “Day after day (when) alone on a hill (where) the man with the foolish grin (who) is standing perfectly still" (what)
Choruses are usually the most memorable element of a song because they deliver the essential messages, the payoff or the knock-out punch. In fact, the title is often found in the chorus. It would be harder here to find an example of when these things AREN'T true.
Refrains (or streamlined chorus) are similar to choruses but they are usually attached by rhyme or meter to the verse before it. That's what we call a refrain. They're usually short, like Dylan's Blowin' in the Wind. However, If the title appears and there are significant additional lyrics to add to the verse it's more likely a chorus.
Bridges are connecting pieces or transitions from one part of a song to another. Bridges tend to break up the pattern of the verse/chorus and offer a “twist” in the story or a change in attitude through the lyrics. They also introduce new chords or progressions and usually only appear once in the song. Lastly, they help refresh the listener's perspective with fresh melody and harmony or chords. When Otis Redding sings “Looks like nothin’s gonna change” in Dock of the Bay, for instance the song temporarily takes on a whole new feel.
Hooks are simply put the most memorable, distinguishable bit of the song. It could be a lyric, a melody line (played or sung) or both. Try this... "I can't get no...." If you didn't complete the line with "satisfaction" you probably don't own a radio.
Breaks are a little relief from the song so far. It's often either an instrumental solo or rhythm section groove. If there are new chords in it, then it is also an instrumental bridge serving as a break. Try the double guitar solos on "Reelin' In the Years."
Codas (or tags) are the special endings for songs. it could be a chorus in a new key or part of the chorus repeated over and over, like "My baby don't care" in Ticket to Ride by the Beatles.
I'm not saying that you need to like the songs listed above but I'll bet if you analyze the songs you do like you'll see that the songwriters are maximizing the elements of song form. Or even better, look at your own songs. You may find ways of making your music even better by tweaking your use of song form.
PS. At some point if it's of interest, we can talk about song form combinations or the ways that these elements are placed together and see how these combinations recognize and respect the expectations of the listening public.
Finally, much of this was adapted from an article in Keyboard Magazine, March 1990. Music has moved on in 16 years, but the principles still stand. I highly recommend reading Keyboard Magazine, even though I'm not a keyboard player because guitar players like me need all the help we can get in analyzing and getting out of the little patterns we gravitate toward.
Song writing is a strange thing. Lots of people do it. Few do it well. A lot of us are somewhere in the middle. What do I mean by well? I guess I feel a song needs to say something that makes the message stronger than if it had been prose or a piece of poetry. Something worth getting stuck in your ear. Don't waste good music on bad lyrics or vise versa.
I've been somewhat disappointed by a lot of songs being written lately because of their structure/song form. Or the lack of it.
Songs need structure. It's what keeps them from just becoming a long string of ideas. Modern song form uses different elements in building a story. (verse, chorus or refrain, bridge, pre-chorus, etc.) If you ever played with Legos you'll understand that each kind of element has a different function. Building a great song takes learning to understand what each element's function is and using their strengths to create a song that people will remember and come back to.
Next time maybe we can discuss ways to use the various elements in strengthening our songwriting. In the mean time, leave a comment or question concerning song form you'd like to discuss.